Tuesday, September 23, 2014

Mia C year 3 100wc NZ

So we are starting on Monday. I’ll tell you what he did each morning. He had to do some gardening or he would get whacked with a frying pan by a little fairy. Oh before I forget I am talking about Mr Gum. He is looking after Pep. It’s short for Pepper. So later in the day Mr Gum (is this not usual) he appeared sitting on a orange  and soft mushroom in the middle of the lake. He had know idea how he got there. Well he saw a peace of card bored he picked it up “ Au ha this is going to be great.” so he got his stapler and stapled the card bored and he had a nap. But he forgot that there was a  crocodile in the lake. 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Mia, it's lovely to see the prompt words highlighted so beautifully. Well done for getting them all in. However, you wrote 131 words in your story. Part of the challenge of the 100WC is to write just 100 words.

    I'm sure you could find some words to take out to bring it down to 100. See what you can do. :)

    Good luck!
    Sarah Team 100WC
    Montpellier, France

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