Far away in a forest lived a family of crocodiles who were very bord from swimming back and forth in the little swomp between the bare trees. But one night pepper the 7 and a half year old crocodile swam to the sogy and wet beach off the small waikanae coast busy thinking to her self. But just then it came to her that she forgot to tell her mum she wanted to move to a soft and cozy place with nice and jusy oranges. So she swam off and told her. She thought for a minute and siad yes so they moved.
Hi Taylah,
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting story you have written! Great job in using the prompt words creatively. Your first sentence is really engaging, grabbing the reader's interest straight away. I can imagine that crocodiles might get bored being in the same swamp all the time. I hope to read more of your 100WCs this year!
Mr. Tim (Team 100WC)
Sarajevo, Bosnia and Herzegovina